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Lying in my own Despite
I feel the blood spit out
wrists are all cut up
my life is becoming fucked up
Bring back my gurl
i need to feel loved

Pain seeps deep
wounds cannot sleep
Brought forth from my doing
Heart broke
Deaf
Mute

Nuthing matters to me
I matter to no-one
Feel these words
My onli release
Presure to much
Life just fucked

Bring it to a end
I cant take to no more
This has screwed the core
Brought about by fear
Loss of controll makes me hurt
More then what she did to me

Help me in this toture
take me away from this place
Darkness needs to end

-- Feel the pain and Leave me alone
©2003-2009 ~supaman-x
:iconsupaman-x:

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Found it on my hardrive while cleaning it out thought i mite put it up think i wrote it about 3 4 weeks ago it was about something i was thinking about and couldnt sleep

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:iconfireflycatcher:
ah choo

lovely

not bs

la la la
:iconfearful-toxicin:
I can really feel the pain behind this, good work. Havent heard from u in a while. But its good to see that u still got talent in poetry.

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Greater is he that lives in me than he that is in the World

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:iconszerael:
hey nice to see another one of your pieces. pretty good. i remember writing something similar to this... at least i think so...
:icongriffo:
Good Work Gaz... except your wrong about something in the 14 teenth line it goes something (I matter to no-one)
(SIFAGE) YOU care to ME so yeh...just had to let you know that :) (Smile) but i like it..Im new to this but it shows true emotions so i think thats why it is good..what else can i say but KEEP IT REAL ahahaha seeya! :D (Big Grin)
:iconlovely-death:
oh shit... I can relate to that immensely, except for the girl part. lol You can feel the suffering; it's very touching. Very nice! Clap

--
Death makes angels of us all
& gives us wings
where we had shoulders
smooth as raven's
claws
-Jim Morrison

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April 29, 2003

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