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Love is like a drag race
Just after your first adrenaline shot
Pams are sweating
Engines are reving

Love is like a bungee Jump
But being afraid of heights
Heart pumping
body Shaking

Love is like a beat
That gets your body moving
Feetgrooving
Mind spining

Love is like a war
That has good and bad
Guns Blazing
Countries Re-building

Love is Like Love
We cannot define
Love.......

Look Inwards
©2003-2009 ~supaman-x
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almost 38hrs without sleep

Insentive: Lack of sleep and my lady o and a new born

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:icongreeneggsandham:
Lovely...really well done. Providing wonderful images and it's true.. love is like all those things. You've showed me that. All I want now is more :D (Big Grin)
:iconfearful-toxicin:
Love is like death,
when your heart is no more.

Good to see you havent lost your touch. Good work.

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:icondallasx:
awesome poem, when i first started reading it i thought, how elementary it was but the last thought tied everything up "looks inward." how complex of a sentence yet the complexity of looking into one's self and actually seeing what love is. i really like it.

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:iconpurpleblobofgoo:
Sorry that my comment is going to be so short, but I can only think of one word to describe this poem... captivating

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<3 Kristen
:iconfaeriecaptive:
yeah the last sentence ends it perfectly. 8) nice job!

~jess~

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July 15, 2003

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